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If I could write something
Profound for you, I would.
All I have, are these simple words.

If I knew how,
I'd describe the light in your eyes..
(They sparkle like the stars, like diamonds, like fire..)
Sadly, there's nothing good enough...

If I could,
I'd describe your voice.
(Like a melody, like a lullaby, like an angel's)
Yet, nothing quite fits...

If I knew how,
I'd describe your heartbeat...
(The most important sound in my world, a soft meter to our time)
But nothing seems to work...

If I knew how,
I'd tell you how much you mean to me...
(I need you more than air, more than water, more than my soul)
But all I have, are these simple words.

I love you.
Sometimes, I don't think even thats enough.
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2008   Writer
Well said! :heart:
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:) Thank you so much!
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2008   Writer
You are very welcome ^^
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:icondweebdanceplz:
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becbecmuffin Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008  Student Writer
This is wonderful! I can definitely relate! :heart:
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad! Thank you!
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becbecmuffin Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008  Student Writer
you're welcome! :)
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XinHun Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
wow...... *silence*
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:faint: That's a first for me...<3
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KaleidoMewStar Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008
How amazing. What a nice work. :aww:
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:iconkearaclearwater:
KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:) Thank you
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KaleidoMewStar Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008
Youre welcome!
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Sorelliena Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008   Digital Artist
O.O Very pretty, and mystical.

I love how those simple words seem to have aeons of meanings behind them ^^
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, thanks! :blush:
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VioletBoo831 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008
This is amazingly well written. I love the way you have it set up! Sometimes the meaning can be lost if the presentation is not done correctly, but you hit it just right.

"If I knew how,
I'd describe your heartbeat...
(The most important sound in my world, a soft meter to our time)
But nothing seems to work..."


Clever and magical...

Whoever this was written to is incredibly lucky.
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! And he knows. ^.^
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VioletBoo831 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008
:shakefist: He's better know how lucky he is!!!
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Lol!
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eruiluvatar Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008
wow this is really awesome.
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: Thank you very much!
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fe-addict Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Though such simple words, they hold the most power.
:clap: Beautiful!
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:blushes: Thank you!
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2008
I love the words, the imagery. :)
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! ^.^
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daneed6 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2008
nice work, i like it ;D
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
^.^ Thank you. :blush:
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projecttao Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2008   Writer
Sometimes, the most powerful love is
beyond what words can say.

Every day, I tell my wife, "I love you more
than what words can say... and with every
fiber of my being."


This is beautiful poetry. You are, by far,
the best poetess on here. I mean it.


-Sean-
Project Tao
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: Thank you, dear. Your words are far too kind..
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projecttao Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2008   Writer
You deserve it. honestly. I'm a loyal fan.
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
^.^ :hug:
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icydevil0 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2008
(They sparkle like the stars, like diamons, like fire..)
:cough:
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: Thank you! ^.^
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icydevil0 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2008
:P Fix that error! :iconanimefaceplz:
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KearaClearwater Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
..I did.
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icydevil0 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2008
:highfive:
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